Well We Walked
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker compares tying shoes with preparing a parachute or boxer, then describes loneliness and lost wildness after the Moon shot. Naming plants and writing lead to a closing recollection of quiet emotion and covers securing the children we charish.
The speaker offers actions against the loss of names and written words: name the front-yard plants, make work a signature, and select nature with a pen. The poem gives no particular mission, household, or identity for Daughter of God.
Tying shoes 'with the care given a parachute' so that not even 'the simplist / flaw' brings a downfall leads to 'After the Moon shot', when some are 'left more alone / than the event itself'. The poem urges 'Name the flowers and plants' and 'Make your work a signature', and ends with covers that 'secure the children we charish, / back when the silent seemed so innocent'.
Care and balance are set against a sense of loss, and naming is offered as a remedy for what fades. The ending is domestic and tender, looking back to innocence without saying what changed; 'charish' and 'bango' are the typed spellings.