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By Jack Joseph Smith

1. During a mid June afternoon in the year nineteen sixty six, Stavrogin Bash got out of a spanking new purple Mustang heading south along the old Pacific Coast Highway up from the far beach end of the Santa Monica Freeway, and to a diametrically sensitively quiet, yet high-strung teen aged blond girl, said, "thanks for the ride." After picking Stavrogin up hitching out of the flowers above Santa Barbara, Jo Hope had told him that she was on a, "valley diet." Stavrogin didn't know what that ment; he also didn't know that he would see Jo Hope again. But right now, with what was significant in the load of ostensibility Stavrogin was capable of keeping his mind on, he was considering his new course with his wife in seperation, Annie Aims. After five years of the rough working and lazy hell-raising the adventure of the road and ocean will bring in youth, Stavrogin and Annie had gone to a pawn shop for a ring along the square in Mc Aurther Park to be married in the downtown civil court of Los Angeles, which was Annie's home town, and also the place of Stavrogin Bash's birth. This extream on the part of Annie took place after a brief affair of long walks and a smattering of books by the sea cliffs, smack at the start of the nineteen sixty four Big Sur

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Jo Hope drops Stavrogin near the Santa Monica Freeway after a ride in her purple Mustang. He then thinks about separation from Annie Aims and recalls buying a pawn-shop ring before their Los Angeles marriage.

Stavrogin does not understand Jo Hope's valley diet, and the narrator notes that they will meet again. He recalls his walks and books with Annie beside the sea cliffs at the start of their Big Sur years.


Claude

Numbered '1.', Stavrogin leaves the purple Mustang and thinks about 'his new course with his / wife in seperation, Annie Aims', whom he had married in a Los Angeles civil court after 'long walks and a smattering of books by the sea cliffs'.

This version links the arrival on the coast to the history of the marriage, ending at Big Sur.