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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The narrator describes a rifle killing, food sizzling on a stove and five men entering before the figure receives their bullets. A margin note names the men as vigalanties seeking vengance.
The narrator places cooking between the rifle shot and the incoming gunfire. The writer distinguishes the attackers from police in the margin, as part of the scene's planned action.
The figure 'blew the man's head off', then returns to cooking until 'the enterance of five men and / the blasts of bullets he received.' A margin note says 'They / cased / the room. / Not police;' but came 'As vigalanties' for 'vengance...'.
The violence is narrated flatly between domestic details; the margin note supplies who the attackers are within the story.