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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The writer revises the armor to Four stones and adds a forehead-stone note. A wounded figure enters a cabin to prepare food, then hears a creak and sees someone through a wall crack.
The narrator places cooking beside armed danger and an unexplained fire. The moonlit phrase includes a partly blotted Moon; the detached armor note also lacks a secure inline position.
The scene arms the figure with 'Four stones strapped to his front / section' and 'Two guns firing out at the police', then moves to his cabin 'under the silver / light beam sword of A Lone Moon on / this onstared night.'
The cabin's ordinary cooking ('the doogh', a 'fortilla') sits beside danger, ending as he sees 'A figure' through the wall. 'Moon' is partly blotted and read provisionally.