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By Jack Joseph Smith
Tidewater
Running from the rope
We sensed the salt
Along the creek
Gee we are so close
To create
The micronism of a folage
A prayer in hope
One way or another
Against fate
And all the wild seas also
We are lost
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker recalls salt along a creek while running from a rope, moves into the source's folage image and prayer against fate and wild seas, then declares that they are lost.
Nearness to creation and the final loss remain in tension. The fragment gives no geography or event beyond its own creek-and-sea images.
'Tidewater' moves from 'Running from the rope / We sensed the salt' to 'The micronism of a folage / A prayer in hope', and ends 'And all the wild seas also / We are lost'.
A short flight toward the sea that ends in loss; micronism and folage are kept as typed.