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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker describes childhood and connections among children, invokes two sailors' weather sayings and closes with custody and a child's need.
Handwritten changes interrupt the poem's account of seasonal connection. Damaged words leave the closing thought incomplete; the page does not establish a particular custody dispute or military event.
'Each Second' begins 'The loss of fear is a child', moves through 'Where seaons connection,' and the rhyme 'Red sky at night, sailors delight', then states 'All children know in visition' and 'custody is not a call! rather a sin', ending unfinished: 'for each child knows the need to'.
The poem sets children's shared knowledge against the language of custody and calling. Seaons keeps the cancelled r out without restoring an s, the handwritten swivEL and the detached At are provisional, the partly blotted word before sin and the damaged final word are omitted, and the page ends mid-sentence.