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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker compares desert and knife with an airplane operated by cowards, tying a revolution to girls with green eyes.
The political and military language belongs to the poem's claim; it does not verify a historical revolution or flight.
'The Girls' piles up 'Work and war and wining', judges that 'The desert and thr knife / Is none the less / more friendly / than an airplane / Witch operated by cowards / Would never land in Navada', and ends 'to fight the revolution / AgAiNst thE girls / with grEEN EYES'.
The handwritten close swerves from war rhetoric into private fixation; the political language is the poem's, not a record of a real revolution or flight. The overwritten heading and handwritten casing remain provisional.