By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker juxtaposes killing, love, unthinking movement, extrEAM beauty, face-to-face joy, death, and loss.
The poem's first-person killing claim is part of a literary voice, not independent evidence of a crime. The corrected word belongs inside the line, not as an isolated acronym.
Under the heading 'Jail', a first-person speaker says 'I didn't see anything when I killed him / I loved it but was not thinking about it', calls the moment 'extrEAM beauty' with 'No trick of the back knot / Just face to face', and ends 'Then dead / Lost with so much honesty / Your gone'.
The poem's killing is a literary speaker's claim, not evidence of a crime; its disturbance lies in pairing violence with joy and honesty. The handwritten EAM replacement in extrEAM remains a provisional alignment.