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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker sets temptation and the cross against height, thin air, a snake, arthritie hands without nails through them, and a claim to know PoNcis PioLEt.
The crosses and hands evoke crucifixion without establishing a literal event. The difficult handwritten closing should not be normalized into historical names or a coherent account beyond the source.
'A Way' begins 'We are not permited to contest the cross / when we stand on top of the world', where 'Down is up when lungs are thin with air', then turns to an aging body: 'Now I wring my arthritie hands / Though Thay have not nails / Through them yet'.
The handwritten close, 'ANd with my ModErN Mob VioLEacE / I KNow PoNcis PioLEt', pulls the crucifixion into a present-day crowd and its judge. The source spellings are kept; patha, the marginal Though, and the insertion order remain provisional, and the inked-out row is not read.