GPT
An address to Liza moves from refusing wasted travel suggestions toward a settled intention to come, claiming that impossibilities have left.
The closing makes the page letter-like, while the opening solar-system fragment resists a smooth narrative. The poem records a stated decision, not confirmation of travel.
Claude
'Liza' begins 'The solar system / Cross over you', says 'Coming to you is not a tough question / I have settled it', and ends 'My mind is made up', with a handwritten 'Love / Jack' below.
A declaration of commitment; Imposibilities is kept as typed, and the handwritten left and closing are provisional.